Ok how does this sound for my finished draft of my resume?
Asked by jrivera_e17
Objective Training position in Marketing/Sales Work Experience Barbara Ann Roessler Ministries - San Juan, PR /Orlando, Fl. (May2006-Present) Direct Supervisor: ....... (phone)... On the job training in service, management and sales. Experience includes; working with children in private school and summer camp. Management and sales in the ministries bookstore. Education Florida Metropolitan University– North Orlando, Florida (February 2007 - Presently attending) Bachelors Degree in Business Administration - Management Related Experience Language Application: English/Spanish (fluent in both) Computer Application: Microsoft Office Suite: Word, Excel, Access, Power Point, and Outlook PeachTree Volunteer Work Oviedo Police Explorer, served 99 hours of community service and received vital skills that have been engraved into my character.

Best Answer:
I would list your objective as you have limited work experience & the reader might find it unclear what you want to do. Start with Skills & Experience as your first part and bullet point your skills - gained via work, volunteer or education. This should come immediately after your objective to make up for your lack of work experience. Don't be so descriptive about your volunteer work. Do not include the hours of service - it almost appears as if it's court mandated. Save that for your cover/introduction letter. For example, you could say: While I have limited paid on-the-job experience, I have gained valuable skills from my volunteer involvment. During my time as a Oviedo Police Explorer I have learned (enter learning experience) that has taught me the importance of being reliable, dedicated & responsible. Good luck & great initiative!
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Answered by brassinpocket