ANY SPECIF CORRECTIONS?Should I hav objective onmy resume 4 a gen office job? Should I include the bakery job?
Asked by Alana K
OBJECTIVE Obtain a position where I can effectively utilize my expertise in human relations, interpersonal and problem solving skills where my experience can be utilized to improve customer satisfaction. EMPLOYMENT 04/2006 – 07/2007 Trinity LLC, JEB DevelopmentVirginia Beach, VA Administrative Assistant Performed general office duties, Responsible for personally assisting managers, Cataloguing documents, Using office equipment 04/2006 – 07/2007 Nobody Construction Virginia Beach, VA Administrative Assistant Performed general clerical duties, Carried out accounting, Organized a filing system, responsibilities, Personally assisted supervisor, Efficiently painted, cleaned, and carried out various labor needs at job sites 01/2007 – 07/2007 Atlanta Bread Company Virginia Beach, VA Bakery Assistant, Cashier Exceeded expectations for excellent customer service skills, Efficiently managed money at cash register, Organized bakery items, Stocked all items needed daily, Assisted in food preparation, Assisted in large catering orders, Extensive cleaning 01/2005 – 04/2006 Cash Express of VA Virginia Beach, VA Managerial Assistant Determined new loan qualification for applicant based on payroll, bank statements, and Infotrac Report analysis, Managed, calculated, and maintained daily till and vault counts, Handled customer inquiries, Computed daily bank deposits and ACH's, Handled accounts payable, Coordinated customer payment arrangements and appointments, Responsible for solely managing the store at some points, Performed general clerical duties, Catalogued paperwork for each customer, Used creativity to promote business through various advertisement projects, Coordinated a number of administrative activities in this busy practice, Maintained up to date paperwork for each client, Extensive phone work, Improved NSF/bankruptcy collections Department by vigorously pursuing delinquent accounts through phone calls, mailings, and Court Judgments, Utilized company database system with data entry and customer loan applications, denial, and collections, Assisted supervisor with all other pertinent duties, Conducted back ground checks daily, Performed duties such as check cashing, Western Union money transfers, bill pay, and money orders, Participated in the training and development of staff

Best Answer:
Giving it a quick once over (I work in the staffing industry), it looks good. The objective looks good & you should keep it. You might want to write "relevant employment history" or "related" instead. Go ahead & keep the bakery job off since it isn't directly related.