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Asked by heifetz
I'm not good in english, but please help me edit for grammer, flow, ect...:
I am interested in the junior architect position advertised on your website. Given my related experience and capabilities I would appreciate your consideration for this job opening. With my four years professional experiences and seven years architecture education would make a strong foundation and ideal match for this position.
In four years career life and two years student intern, I have worked both in architecture and interior design fields which provided me a fundamental understanding of construction, structure and architecture mechanical systems. I participated different scale planning and design projects, and developed various professional knowledge and skills in the range from architecture large scale planning to small scale detail design. I have also contributed during all the various stages of the projects including:
Architecture:
• Schematic design, design development and construction drawings
• Elevation design and detail design
• Participated in visual presentation producing
• 3D models making and rendering
Interior:
• Project management through all project phases including programming, planning, design, budgeting and construction contract administration. Anticipating the problems and solve the problems in design and on site.
The attachment is my resume and work sample which illustrate my skills, experience and accomplishments. If you are seeking a junior architect who stays abreast of his field, who is technically informed, and who can contribute effectively as a team member, please consider what I have offered.
Thank you for your attention to these materials. I certainly look forward to exploring this further.
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