Can someone proofread my CV?
Asked by Marcos Lopez
I need someone to correct my CV. My English is very limited and no one know can help me. Objective -------------------- To obtain a position of Seamstress or Quality Control Inspector to work in the field of manufacturing. The applicant to have more than two decades of experience and skills in this field. Work Experience -------------------- *Manufacture children's and women's clothing, and lingerie. Worked in all areas including: temple making, cutting, design, and manufacture garments. Made with full responsibility projects from start to finish. *Garment alterations. *Manufacture cover for seat passenger aircraft using fire-resistant fabric approved for aeronautical use. *Manufacture a whole set *of sailor costumes for schoolchildren. *Designed and manufacture traditional Venezuelan dresses. *Manufacture communion dresses. *Manufacture carnival costumes. Seamstress / Tailor at Dry Cleaning Business -------------------- *Greeting and approaching customers promptly to determine type and quality of tailoring necessary. Assisting customers with their questions. Assisting customers with altering clothes to personal specifications. Quality Control Inspector -------------------- *Inspecting finished bulletproof vests for Police and Army, products being processed, incoming materials, parts, and assemblies for conformance to company standards. Work under general supervision, reporting to a manager or head of department. *Making reports indicating results of inspections. May obtain samples to conduct analysis and determine measures to be taken to remedy deviations from standards. Skills -------------------- *Ability to operate domestic sewing machines and industrial: overlock,, blindstitch,, walking foot.

Best Answer:
I am not overly familiar with your industry, so some of my terminology may be off. But here are my suggestions: Objective -------------------- To obtain a position of Seamstress or Quality Control Inspector in the field of manufacturing when I can utilize my X YEARS of garment manufacturing experience while expanding my professional skill set. Work Experience -------------------- (You should list the name(s) of the companies you worked for, along with the dates you worked for them.) Duties & Responsibilities: *Responsible for all aspects related to the manufacture of children's and women clothing, and lingerie. * Experienced in all areas of garment manufacturing, from start to finish, including template making, cutting, design, and manufacturing. Related Skills: *Garment alterations (include examples of the type of alterations you have done.) * Experienced in the design and manufacture of traditional Venezuelan dresses. • Experienced in the design and manufacture of specialty dress wear, including girls' communion dresses. • Experienced in the design and manufacture of novelty clothing items and uniforms, including children's naval uniforms and carnival costumes * Familiar with various aspects of upholstery production, including the manufacture of aircraft seat covers utilizing fire-resistant materials. *Highly proficient in the operation of all domestic and industrial sewing machines, including Overlock, Blindstich, and Walking Foot models. Seamstress / Tailor at Dry Cleaning Business (list the name of the company) -------------------- Responsibilities & Duties: *Greeted new and prospective customers. Quickly ascertained customer needs in order to expedite timely and accurate delivery of services. * Fielded customer questions regarding prices, policies and procedures. • Assisted with making detailed alterations to customer clothing. Quality Control Inspector (list the company where you did this) -------------------- Responsibilities & Duties: *Inspected finished bulletproof vests for Police and Army personnel to ensure highest production standards. • Managed delivery of incoming parts, materials and assemblies for conformance to company standards. * Managed a production staff of X employees * Provided regular production reports to head of department. , Provided reports detailing inspection results. Obtained production samples with which to conduct analysis and correct deviations to defined standards. I hope this was helpful.