can anyone tell me what's wrong with my resume?
Asked by slick09
Summary: * Well-organized and efficient. * Proficient in the use of various software packages including Microsoft Word. * Organized and efficient. * Extensive experience in retail sales. * Dependable - can work without supervision. * Achieved consistent client satisfaction. * Computer literate - can quickly learn new software. Employment: Home Depot/Retail Outsource West Nyack, NY Full Time Sales Associate June 2007 to December 2008 * Sold merchandise to individuals in the store utilizing knowledge of products sold. * Put new merchandise on display. * Took inventory of stock. CompUSA White Plains, NY Technology Mentor June 2006 to April 2007 * Sold merchandise to individuals in stores and showrooms, utilizing knowledge of products sold. * Greeted customers on sales floor and ascertained make, type and quality of merchandise desired. * Kept dept stocked & cleaned daily * Assisted customers in locating various products, as well as assisting them in technical matters. * Gave in-depth insight of the various service plans and replacement plans depending on the product available to the customer. * Explained and identified all necessary ways to continue longevity of products sold. Best Buy Hartsdale, NY Wireless Associate May 2004 to May 2006 * Sold merchandise to individuals in stores and showrooms, utilizing knowledge of products sold. * Displayed merchandise, suggested selections that met customer's needs, and emphasized selling points of article, such as quality and utility. * Received cash payment or obtained credit authorization. * Put new merchandise on display. * Took inventory of stock. * Requisitioned merchandise from stockroom and kept my department clean daily. * Assisted customers in locating various products, as well as assisting them in technical matters. * Gave in-depth insight of the various service plans and replacement plans depending on the product available to the customer. * Explained and identified all necessary ways to continue longevity of products sold. Education: Westchester Community College Valhalla, NY Partial credits towards Associate Degree 2000 Fort Valley State University Fort Valley, GA Partial credits towards Associate Degree 1997 to 1998 Karafin School Mount Kisco, NY Diploma (Academic) 1995 Other: * Trained in customer service and cashiering. * Expert technical knowledge of the Internet. i feel like alot of companies are not considering me because of it but it looks alright to me

Best Answer:
it seems fine to me...the only thing i would do to make it stand out is maybe put it on a different color paper ..nothing to colorful but maybe a beige it could be any color but a color that is very light...and maybe shorten it a little more...make sure it fits on one page...some people dont like to read so much..like maybe you can take out some things that arent as important ..good luck and maybe you can help me with my questions..