Please read over my resume its my first and im trying to become a bank teller?
Asked by Double Mocha Rasberry Chocolate
Hi I would like to be a bank teller part time but before i send in my resume i would like u guys to read it over to give me any advice or any unnecessary things that need to be taken out.Im 17 and b of a does hire at 17 because my aunt told me about this job who is a bank auditor for bank of america. So please i would greatly appreciate your advice. Objective I am seeking a position as Teller with Bank of America where I can use the skills I have learned and to further my knowledge with this company. Qualifications Understand the importance of customer service of providing excellent service to maintain customer satisfaction. Enjoy working with people and very self-motivated. Proficient with 10-key Excellent communication and interpersonal skills. Great computer skills; Microsoft office, general computer task and internet. Work History Sno Shack of Bakersfield May. 2009 - Aug. 2009 (seasonal) Completed inventory forms after each shift and balanced out perfectly everytime after first couple days of employment. Provided excellent costumer service by greeting costumers. Performed many cleaning duties, handled cash, served and made the snow cones independently. S.O.S. Shoes Aug. 2007- 2008 Provided great costumer service by assisting costumers with shoe selection and greeted customers who walked in. Operated the register. Unloaded merchandise and stocked shelves. Childcare/Houskeeping Sept. 2006 - Present Watched children for several families. Demonstrated excellent houskeeping for family and friends. Volunteer Experience Teacher's Aide/Tutor 2006 - 2009 Helped improve 3rd - 4th grade students math and reading skills. Tested students to see improvement in math and did fun learning activities to raise test scores. Ran errands; filed and organized papers. Graded papers and put grades into computer. Camp Counselor 2007- 2009 in the month of Feb. Supervised children and made their trip a fun and enjoyable experience. Taught kids about teamwork and responsibility. Mary Kay Beauty Consultant Feb 2009- Present Created fun glamour parties for people to sample the best and latest products of Mary Kay. Sold $300 worth of products my first month. Provided excellent costumer service for my costumers by delivering their products to their door in person and called them to make sure they had enough of their products left. Duplicating Office Aide Sept 2006 - May 2008 Stapled, collate, and copied papers. Ran errands for teachers and mailed out important school announcements. Created school flyers and programs for school events. Education Bakersfield Community College General biology and Medical Terminology High School Diploma Bakersfield High School Took out references and heading.

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Objective I am seeking a position as Teller with Bank of America where I can use the skills I have learned and to further my knowledge with this company. - Don't use I. Everything should start with a verb - Seeking a position as a Bank Teller with Bank of America where I can use the skills and knowledge learned to further contribute to the Bank and the customers of the bank. Qualifications - Change to Summary of Qualifications. (here you can start with I) I am excellent at providing top notch customer service and I am able to effectively maintain customer satisfaction. I am also self motivated and enjoy working both alone and with a team of people. Work History ( Pick the most relevant jobs you've done; at most 3) Sno Shack of Bakersfield May. 2009 - Aug. 2009 (seasonal) Completed inventory forms after each shift and balanced out perfectly everytime after first couple days of employment. Provided excellent costumer service by greeting costumers. Performed many cleaning duties, handled cash, served and made the snow cones independently. S.O.S. Shoes Aug. 2007- 2008 Provided great costumer service by assisting costumers with shoe selection and greeted customers who walked in. Operated the register. Unloaded merchandise and stocked shelves. Childcare/Houskeeping Sept. 2006 - Present Watched children for several families. Demonstrated excellent houskeeping for family and friends. Volunteer Experience Teacher's Aide/Tutor 2006 - 2009 Helped improve 3rd - 4th grade students math and reading skills. Tested students to see improvement in math and did fun learning activities to raise test scores. Ran errands; filed and organized papers. Graded papers and put grades into computer. Camp Counselor 2007- 2009 in the month of Feb. Supervised children and made their trip a fun and enjoyable experience. Taught kids about teamwork and responsibility. Mary Kay Beauty Consultant Feb 2009- Present Created fun glamour parties for people to sample the best and latest products of Mary Kay. Sold $300 worth of products my first month. Provided excellent costumer service for my costumers by delivering their products to their door in person and called them to make sure they had enough of their products left. Duplicating Office Aide Sept 2006 - May 2008 Stapled, collate, and copied papers. Ran errands for teachers and mailed out important school announcements. Created school flyers and programs for school events. Education Bakersfield Community College (did you finish?) if you did - state completion date - if not list "Projected completion date - " General biology and Medical Terminology High School Diploma (did you finish?) list completion date. Bakersfield High School Skills: Proficient with 10-key, Excellent communication and interpersonal skills.Great computer skills; Microsoft office, general computer task and internet. Strong Money handleing abilities. Took out references and heading. (put these back) under references: Provided upon request. Best of luck to you!

I would split references off into a separate document. Other than that, it looks quite good :)
Answered by lexa10881

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Answered by Chris