How does my resume look to you?
Asked by Kiley
I was not having good luck with my resume so I posted it on here and I have now made improvements. Please tell me what you think, or/and what you would change Objective: To work in a stable, established, professional environment with growth potential. Experience: 2007-CurrentMile High Constructors, LLC, Denver, Co Office managerDuties to include but are not limited to: •Answering phones •Filing •Billing •Payroll •Scheduling •Quickbooks Pro •Microsoft office • Excel 2004-2009Aspen Park Veterinary Clinic, Aspen Park, Co Surgical and laboratory veterinary technician managerDuties include but not limited: •Checking clients in and out •Maintaining medical records • Maintenance and service in the laboratory •Ordering and inventory • Scheduling. 2001-2004Hermosa Veterinary Clinic, Denver, Co Surgical and Hospital Veterinary Technician Duties include but not limited to: •Checking clients in and out •Payments •Maintaining medical records •Ordering and inventory • Scheduling Education: 1996-1999Conifer High School, High School Diploma 1999-2001Red Rocks Community College Taking psychology, and sociology The format does not transfer over verry well when I cut and paste. But I think that you get the idea I do not want to make money from home and I do not want any information on other web sites that take me to get rich crap. People need to get a life and stop soliciting people in here!

Best Answer:
Your intro should expand on your objective and what you would like to get out of the job ie: I would like to obtain a position that would allow me to expand my experience and knowledge in (field of interest) and grow with the company. Most company don't want people with too much experience, at least not in the entry level position, reason being that they would like to mold you into the position and if you're stuck in your own ways, they will not have much use for you unless they are looking for restructuring. BTW, your resume should not be more then two pages long, in fact, two pages would be too much, skim it down to one, that would best. Remember to talk about your five year plan at the bottom of your resume. Thus, (1.) Objective, (2.) Experience, (3.) Five year plan.

your objective needs to be more assertive. nobody's going to hire you if your whole reason for being there is to "work in a stable, established, professional environment with growth potential". you need to show you have drive, ability, and a genuine will to be there.
Answered by OGRE!!!

Include some major honors or achievements if you have any... maybe foreign language knowledge? and be specific, specify whether you're looking for full- or part-time position.
Answered by Yo2222